Week Four
I feel that my revisions done to my final truly helped make it better then my rough! I feel that I defiantly appealed more to my audience, the editors after each main point. I also feel that changing my criterion of one paragraph helped it to not be as vague. Lastly defending My CA and R made my final much better. Over all I feel that my final draft is to my best abilities. My writing process began with me brain storming on the wiki and getting ideas from other classmates. I then started to write my rough and after you commented I made more revisions on it my self, to make the final draft. Next time I would like to work more on an outline during my brain storming.Therefor when it comes time to write my rough draft im well prepared.
I see essay 2 building upon essay 1 the critique by taking the process of summarizing as we did before and now adding another step on to it. For instance this other step would now be synthesizing. Essay 1 will help us in Essay 2 when we need to compare the summaries of all the contexts and give the gist on what we feel.